In need of a serious crit.

This is the video so far that tries to explain what my idea is for the Spotify Digital Advertising brief for D&AD. I’ve spent three days on this video from the basic visuals, to the text animations and little tweaks in the timeline. The one thing that’s very obvious to me is that the facebook sweep across needs to be slowed down which is something I’ll rectify tomorrow.

It feels almost final to me and after giving myself a three hours reprieve from when I last saw it (after 10 hours of staring at After Effects) it doesn’t look as awful as I was worried about.

Please comment, please criticise.